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“The Sand Man”


Accompanied by fear
I make my choice
Falling apart like a sand structure
I melt in the weather

Becoming one with the earth
I spread my seed
Taking in things
My body won’t need

I crawl all alone
I do not care
About the places I go
Or the sand that I wear

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