My baby I love you,
although I have to go.
I am so sorry ,for leaving you,
for there is no other way ,that I know.
My heart is violently breaking,
as you stare deep down ,in my eyes.
For the tears are flowing,
as I fear your sad demise.
It is my fault ,that I spoiled you,
for I thought, I would always be here.
If only I had knew,
I wouldn't of loved you so dear.
From birth you have given me,
more love, than I can share.
When taunted and beaten,
my Zane ,you were always there.
I messed up by treating you,
like you were my baby, that I never had.
So much that when you pot-tied,
you never knew, how to use the grass.
While sleeping on my pillow,
you give me comfort, through the night.
And when you get thirsty ,
you smack your lips, for there is no light.
As I dip my fingers, in the water,
your love ,for me shines so bright.
I cook your food ,
and break it up for you.
But you are so greedy,
sometimes, you forget to chew.
You have choking spells and depression,
anytime that I have to go.
It worries me so much.
that I won't be around, to watch you grow.
I am scared, of you dying,
for this I can't conceive.
Your broken heart will falter,
my son, I do believe.
Author notes
I have to find Zane a home to get out of this abusive relationship.
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, poor mama 'n my poor little brother! 
, it's otay mama it's otay, Zane is strong 'n I pray he'll be ok as you shall...
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I can feel your heartbreaking as I read away.
I relate to the degree of having 2 dogs who are my everything. I couldnt even bare the thought that I had to let them go, I just couldnt.
This was so well written expressing your emotion well
Thank you and good luck
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sad and emotional and very well written,thanks for entering and good luck
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I can see how much this breaks
your heart..
I don't know what to say
except I'm sorry ..
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Sad
What a poem about having to leave, it is extremely sad. But it is a wonderful write, the only thing that I saw that might make it better is....Line 11, try known instead of knew.
I hope this isn't real, I would hate for that sadness to be actual...
You are in my prayers, may GOD watch over and protect you and give you your hearts desire.
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Darling, once again i come to Ap to find my heart led to yours. This is unacceptable and you know it. You are indeed allowing the evil spirit to take control of you. YOU can not allow it to do this. You have many who need your love. Your child indeed needs you my friend. DO NOT allow this to conquer you, you lift your sword my friend and conquer it!
Do mark my words you will battle this one just as you have the others. Seek a way out. You deserve happiness and deserve raising your child without distraction. Getr out and get it done.
I am praying. But, Also I will remain your shield my friend, I will not allow you to give up.You know me already...
Love you
Tory
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a very sad poem.your departure is painfully written,espessially the one you loves.I will pray for you. Erwin
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Oh This is so heartbreaking. I wish their was some other way . Their has to be.
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If there was I beg god to show me.
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Heart breaking
This was so sad to read. I can so relate as leaving my baby would tear me apart to. I will do everything in my power to ensure he is well looked after hunni, I promise
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I know you would my friend.
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this is sad auntie i love you
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Don't be sad baby.
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So wonderfully sketched
Hugs xx
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You are so kind.
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Wonderful though sad .
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Thank you yogi so much.
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