The bitter cynic
Laughs at his flaws
In hope that the irony
Will lessen the loss
Of the person he thought
The world would see
And the bitter cynic
He’d meant not to be
A contest entry
- Suicidal Tendencies by Haunted Doll.
675 points, ended December 4, 2007, 11 entries
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Comments
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this was more on an intelectual level. i was seeking a more emotional write. more descriptive. though tis was well done for what it is.
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This is good, interesting structure and good imagery well done and good luck in the contest
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