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Waiting To Fly At Midnight

(Verse 1)

Downtown getting around
moving my body to the edge
of the sounds.

Getting it up, getting it down

I knew they would be looking

in every part of town.
But I was sky high

waiting to fly at midnight.
But I was sky high

waiting to fly at midnight.

 

(Chorus)

 

So they've feed you all
in their jester's crown's.
Telling everybody that
their coming around.

Sign you up if your numbers due

watch out everybody

your be next in Que

your be next in Que.

But I was sky high

waiting to fly at midnight.

But I was sky high

waiting to fly at midnight.

 

(Verse 2) 


Up front in the musical Que
don't let everybody get
in front of you.

Sam says you've been

long overdue,

stick you in the jungle 

till they send a bag for you. 

But I was sky high

waiting to fly at midnight. 

But I was sky high

waiting to fly at midnight.

 

(Chorus)

So they've feed you all

in their jester's crown's.
Telling everybody that
their coming around.

Sign you up if your number's due

watch out everybody

your be next in Que

your be next in Que.

But I was sky high

waiting to fly at midnight.

But I was sky high

waiting to fly at midnight.

 

(Musical Interlude) 

 

(Bridge)

Paradise lost to the rebel's cause

politicians calling the shot's

what have they got in store?

Listen my brother's

what are you waiting for

crying out my lung's it's another war,
another war, another war,

it's another war.


(Verse 3)


Up front waiting to fly
don't let anybody put

the blind in your eye's. 

Propaganda is the Devil's friend,

that's what they've been feeding

just to trick us again.

But I was sky high

waiting to fly at midnight.
But I was sky high

waiting to fly at midnight.

But I was sky high

waiting to fly at midnight

But I was sky high

waiting to fly at midnight. 

 

(Chorus) 

 

So they've feed you all
in their jester's crown's.
Telling everybody that
their coming around.

Sign you up, if your number's due

watch out everybody

your be next in Que

your be next in Que.

But I was sky high

waiting to fly at midnight.

But I was sky high

waiting to fly at midnight.

 

(Repeat Chorus) 

 

I was... sky high waiting to fly at midnight... 

I was... sky high waiting to fly at midnight...

 

Fade... 

 

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Comments


  • Tangled Angle
    December 1, 2007
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    Very clever, I like this.
    But I cannot help but be irked by the fact that you did not edit this...always, always, always go through and edit before you enter something in a contest...especially mine!

    If I know you I'm so going to kick your butt!
    If we just met then...well you can get away with it- but I'm not sure if I can give a reward a poem that has so many errors. Please edit this!

    Thanks a ton.


    • Timespell
      December 2, 2007
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      Cheers

      I have always had a problem with my grammar. I understand it does make a difference when being read.
      So will obviously go over it in more detail. I am more than happy for you or anyone else, to point out my mistakes.

      Thanks for reading and "pointing out" these errors.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~


      • Tangled Angle
        December 2, 2007

        Edit | Reply
        Ah- I didn't point them out because they are pretty obvious.

        They're (they're my jeans)
        their (their jeans were nice)
        there (there are the jeans)

        I think there were others, but I think you're capable of picking them up with a re-read.

        You should be able to pick these up on your own. [grammar and punctuation errors]

        Good job on the lyrics though, they were good.