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Mind's thoughts



thoughts of genius and lunacy
capture symbols within mind’s reservoir
gathered from exchanges between you and me;
as meaning imports pearls and thorns
onto soul’s battleground in search of significance,
connotations become ingrained as nuances
converting thoughts of life and of love

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  • CherryOnTop
    December 16, 2007
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    This is gorgeous!!The words inflamate such vision.Good luck in the contest. Well penned.


  • leo2
    December 7, 2007

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    Who knows what thoughts lurk in the mind of genius and lunacy. I'd be much obliged if you didn't tell anyone about me.....lol.... just kidding. Best of luck in the challenge. Excellent mastery of the English language here.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • penman gold member
    December 3, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Very concise expressions. So well done. Best of luck in the contest.


  • myrataal silver member
    December 3, 2007
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    Ah., Concise and intense.

    Now go for that gold!

    Love
    Myra


  • The Sage
    December 1, 2007
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    Short, yet bearing a stronger world of meaning, to this earth. Amazing.

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