Sweet scent of Jasmine, a soft melody,
my tender rose is awaiting me.
Delicate petals, draped perfectly,
a top the sheets of ivory.
Hair of golden locks, scattered wild,
entwined within my fingers piled.
A soft tender yank, a kiss to her lips,
hands simply caress the curves of her hips.
Passion rips through my pores, I smile,
her body fitting perfectly, sharing different styles.
She’s more sensual, a little on romance,
I’m more heated, into an erotic dance.
Softly, her petals flutter beneath me,
tender softness, as she succumbs free.
My body thrilled, by this ladies touch,
aroused beyond a ten, my gears shift and such.
Entwining without hesitation, she gives in,
as I caress her throbbing bud, I settle within.
Her petals spread, further in I sink,
sending her blossoms reeling, I inhale her exotic drink.
Author notes
romance sensual hint of erotic.
Background Credit: Thanks to Lord Merlynn for this BG.
(love you Scott)
A contest entry
- Weave Me Some Sensual Magic by StormGoddess.
390 points, ended December 6, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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damn hot Tory
breath breath I tell myself this. breathless, and sooo sentual.
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thanks Nic
Love you..
wheres the love???>
scotts name was mentioned these are old poems...i will delete them
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do we have a metaphor?
GREAT! i love it! this is about two women right. perfect flow and romantic, very good metaphors! sweet yet sex, sexual but not trashy or nasty! veary smooth! -
Whoa! HOT!
Loved this poem, Victoria! Perfect rhymes, perfect rhythm, perfect flow, perfect poem! You score 10 out of 10, plus 10 more! Your poem blew me off, and in fact I am a little relieved, because now I know you will appreciate one of mine, which you surely will notice. I cross my fingers you win in this contest, and I give you my applause, you deserve each and every point! Got to read more of your poems! Jim
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thanks alot, glad you enjoyed this..this is one of my milder ones *hides eyes* yea I know bad Victoria bad...but hey thats the way the public likes it
Thanks for reading
tory
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Shit! You talking about me "Her petals spread, further in I sink,
sending her blossoms reeling, I inhale her toxic drink"
Nice!!!Actually you can kinda feel it sinking.
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Definitely sensual and hinting at the erotic. Sounds like a good go to me. Nicely done.
Thank you for entering and good luck
Storm -
Very sensual and erotic my dear, I feel like parting petals now
I Love you.. 
Scott Muah baby
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do i sense some pent up agression my dear? jk love it tory
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sure but i know how to handle it.
Thanks for reading me
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wow, it is hot and the hottie, some write. guess i have to leave, my eyes are smoking. lol. very nice.
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Very hot and sensual!
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wow this is an amazing and sensual write which holds so much within it and is powerfully done. i love it well done mom
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What a beauty of the words you have described..I am just fascinated my friend..well done..
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