This whole thing hurt me
did it hurt you?
I hope not.
I didn't mean for it to end like this but I'd had enough
I had to do something
so I told you everything
I gave you all I've got
but now I am the Queen of Regret
I thought I could just erase you
I thought i could forget
but it doesn't look like that's something I can do
It's too late now
I can't believe I did this to you
I can't believe I did this to me
I don't know how all of this got so out of control
now I am the Queen of Regret
I thought I could just erase you
I thought i could forget
but it doesn't look like that's something I can do
I'm so sorry for what I put you through
but you apologized too
for all of this you said
what exactly did you do?
boy what I would give to get back inside your head
but that's not going to happen tonight
whether this is wrong or right
it doesn't matter because
now I am the Queen of Regret
I thought I could just erase you
I thought i could forget
but it doesn't look like that's something I can do
Author notes
we are over as friend and it sucks
A contest entry
- meh by Anonymous Shadow.
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Yeah, it sucks . Try to show, not tell. This has potential to create tears.
Please check my poem out too?
Thanks for the read, and great job.
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this is really good. I like hwo you're so concerned for this person, and how you're realizing what you've done.
but now I am the Queen of Regret
I thought I could just erase you
I thought i could forget
but it doesn't look like that's something I can do
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This would be Bill? Gow girl up sounds like you have no choice. We have to be tough some times even when it hurst so bad.
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yea it was Bill. It's going to take a long time to heal from this one.... but I'll cowgirl up...
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