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*Remembering Your Face*

Why when i sleep at night only your face comes to mind
your body lying right along side of mine
Your face looking ever so peaceful
But as soon as i awaken
My dreams become erased
and your face is never to b seemed
Falling in such distance
Racing to keep up
Wanting these thoughts to be erased from my feelings
My feelings I hold in side my soul
In my soul i know nothing but my memories
My memories i hold just so i can remember your face...

Not quite finished yet, give me sum ideas though

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  • allie529
    March 12

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    i really like this one, you have a solid idea behind it. it is so true how we can escape to dreams and memories to keep a love alive, but when we awaken, we see reality, and reality can really suck sometimes.
    • this was about the guy i was telling you about and right now i cant even remember his face. It hurts so bad.