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Gifts of Life

Bare in mind, the challenge life holds.

When moments shared are in someone else’s control.

Love from the distance, a hard task indeed.

I love him and well, he loves me.

The paths have entwined, the footage becomes weak.

Yet it is a miracle, I brace onto, hoping He sees.

That the connection between me and this man,

Is something more powerful then that of a soft hand.

In times this they need to be strong, sturdy you see.

So they can battle the days, conquer the nights inquiry.

Its what you hold within your heart, that will pull you through.

Be strong and listen, the best will be handed to you.


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Many Footsteps Between Two Hearts, Please Share Your Story
If fate has tested your love with cold, harsh miles please answer my call to strength.


(love you scott)

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  • Blooming Poet Greeters member
    January 14
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    Beautiful. i can relate so much with this well penned piece.

  • Electric Sunrise Moderators member
    December 27, 2007
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    Firstly allow me to apologise for the late judgement of this contest on behalf of the host. This is a testimony to lovers everywhere, great piece, i'd love to let my other half see this just to see her smile from reading it. Excellent work here and well done, best of luck in the contest :)

  • Griswold silver member
    December 1, 2007

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    Wonderfully done sweetheart, every job I do brings it one mile closer, patience my dear, Love you...Scott


  • Lonewolf2008 gold member
    December 1, 2007

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    awwwww hopw sweet, and its tough for miles far apaert seem to enlarge to greater distances and time is slow about reconnecting. love to me, is the greatest gift. well done.

  • x-Black-Butterfly-x silver member
    December 1, 2007

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    this is a beautiful and powerful write mum which holds deep imagery and emotions within it. well done and best of luck

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