Bare in mind, the challenge life holds.
When moments shared are in someone else’s control.
Love from the distance, a hard task indeed.
I love him and well, he loves me.
The paths have entwined, the footage becomes weak.
Yet it is a miracle, I brace onto, hoping He sees.
That the connection between me and this man,
Is something more powerful then that of a soft hand.
In times this they need to be strong, sturdy you see.
So they can battle the days, conquer the nights inquiry.
Its what you hold within your heart, that will pull you through.
Be strong and listen, the best will be handed to you.
Author notes
Many Footsteps Between Two Hearts, Please Share Your Story
If fate has tested your love with cold, harsh miles please answer my call to strength.
(love you scott)
A contest entry
- Many Footsteps Between Two Hearts, Please Share Your Story by Benjamin D. Warden.
600 points, ended December 27, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Beautiful. i can relate so much with this well penned piece.
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Firstly allow me to apologise for the late judgement of this contest on behalf of the host. This is a testimony to lovers everywhere, great piece, i'd love to let my other half see this just to see her smile from reading it. Excellent work here and well done, best of luck in the contest :)
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Wonderfully done sweetheart, every job I do brings it one mile closer, patience my dear, Love you...Scott


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awwwww hopw sweet, and its tough for miles far apaert seem to enlarge to greater distances and time is slow about reconnecting. love to me, is the greatest gift. well done.





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this is a beautiful and powerful write mum which holds deep imagery and emotions within it. well done and best of luck


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