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Fabulous

You can't handle this

little boy! I'm way too fabulous

whispering sweet nothings in my ear

all those cheesy lines

you'll never get near

My raven locks will give your body shocks

My beautiful anatomy is too much for you to see

you can't handle this

little boy! I'm way too fabulous

a goddess; fierce and strong

all that lust in your eyes, I see it

you'll never get what's between my thighs

you can't handle this

little boy! I'm way too fabulous

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NineTailedFox

I AM FABULOUS!!! I say it everyday! I look at myself in the mirror and just go "GIRL YOU'RE SO FRICKIN' FABULOUS!" my friend had to fill out a paper and the question was 'what's a word that describes your friend?' fabulous was all she could say! because I am!! "Honey, I'm way too fabulous!" is my catch phrase! yay me!

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  • takemypainaway
    March 11, 2008

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    very cute

    funny its good to be fabulous

    great write

    thank you for entering!!

    **kat

  • Nighttime angel
    March 2, 2008

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    I love this poem so much. thats right you keep doing that. you are fabulous.. at some point in my life I started to be more self confident and I try to say that everyday.. I absolutely love this poem. excellent poem

    thank you for entering and good luck

    kat


  • BellaD
    January 12, 2008
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    Great read!

    This is well written and a lot of fun to read! Nice job on this.


  • Tarja
    December 26, 2007

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    This was quite obnoxious! Not bad. Though I do think that this could have been more powerful... you didn't do a bad job at all, thanks so much for the honest entry! Good luck.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    December 15, 2007

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    I love this thank you for shairng this with me and yes sometimes we are just to good for them Best wishes and much love


  • DarkestAngel68
    December 11, 2007

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    Awesome

    This is a great poem. Often I feel lost and alone and I would give anything to be loved once more. This poem made me remember what is was like.....3 YEARS AGO! lol. No but truely this is excellent work.


  • Stardust100
    December 9, 2007

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    wow with confidence like that watch out boys. Excellent nice to see that confidence shining through.


  • hypnorocker
    December 9, 2007

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    thats the spirit of a woman who knows what she's worth...
    spunky, very self confident, and comfortable with her own sexual nature... nice emotional spicing here to top off a wonderful poem.. it speaks volumes for the few lines.


  • HeavenScent4U
    December 5, 2007

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    i love the attitude behind this poem all i can say is job well done, you nailed this thanks for your wonderful poem. be well and be blessed


  • aboomer silver member
    December 2, 2007

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    This is good. Realistic images, well worded. Short, but says it all...the goddess who knows she is fabulous.
    Good luck in your contest.


  • ThatONEweirdChick
    December 1, 2007

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    Wow. This is a pretty nice poem you've got here. The only thing I could say is to maybe make sure you use 'too' instead of 'to' so it says 'too fabulous'
    Otherwise, a very good write.


  • HeavenScent4U
    November 30, 2007
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    shorten this up to 15 lines

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