Tonight she will be mine.
I watch you through your bedroom window
undressing for my eyes.
I smell the blood pumping through such innocent veins,
tonight Maria, you will be mine.
Sleeping naked under satin sheets.
I enter, an open window, silently.
You awake; I hide my teeth but bare my hardness
to your curious, widened eyes.
Moving swiftly and undressing myself quickly I climb over and
spread your toned smooth legs.
Your hand goes to my throbbing hardness, so ready for you.
I push forward, finding your wetness and desire to feel me.
Your nails sink into my arse and push me deeper.
If only my slave, you knew I now have the scent of blood.
Even if it is my own.
I find your hardened nipples and tease with squeezes.
Soon I shall taste every part of you.
I move you, your clit is rubbing against me, you moan and pussy muscles
begin to tighten. I ache to cum, start to feel it so I hold you closer,
and fuck even harder.
The only words you spoke that night “You devil, oh shit yesssssss, I’m cumming”!
With my final thrust, my juices free- flowing.
I bare my teeth and smile wickedly as fear arrives in your eyes.
A hand goes to your mouth not wanting
to hear the seconds away, screams.
I lower myself to your damp neck, moving your soft hair
aside I give not even a glance.
Sucking on your sweet nectar, I grunt and
still I hold your breast.
Author notes
Option 9
CinDiCiliouS
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- Erotic & Sensual • next in list
- Silver Shiny's... • next in list
- Bronze Trophy winning Poems... • next in list
A contest entry
- Poetic Erotica by A U R I E L L E to a women by Aurielle.
600 points, ended December 1, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Razorsedge's round 2 contest!!(invite only) by ExpectingMommy18.
600 points, ended December 6, 2007, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - And Erotica For All...... by Master Ktulu.
450 points, ended January 27, 2008, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Mmmmmm.... SEXY by Still single.
500 points, ended July 17, 2008, 30 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Good sexy write, thanks for the entry.
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lol go sis
congrtas on the sliver n the bronzes
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Excellent write...I loved the dark feel to this one. Thank you for entering and being one of the few to follow the rules.
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Thanks MK, I had hoped I followed the rules, so good to hear I did lol
Cindy
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Congrats on your trophies This is hot and morbid. My kind of poem.
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Thanks Aunty J
I was glad to be able to pull hot and morbid off lol
Cin
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wow this was great!
im glad you entered in time
time for a cold shower with this peice,amazing write.
thanks for the entry and good luck with the contest
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Thank you so much, I really enjoyed the challenged. And I have your contest mostly to thank for waking my muse
Cindy
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It really has returned with full force hasn't it sweetness ? You painted a beautifully dark and erotic picture and although I don't use the word often in poetry you gave style to fuck which so many poets are unable to do. Congratulations on a wonderful poem Baby Girl. More Congratulations on the Bronze and Good Luck in your Rounds contest
Love Mum
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Mum
Thanks Mum, My muse is definetly alive again hehehehe
This was challenge but it felt so damn good to be writing too, LOL
Ur Daughter
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wow really really goood. I love how the imagery of you going into the bd though it made me think that you were a strange juts comming in. Sexy.......................
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Thank you for a lovely comment aurielle
Cindy
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Aneerily dark piece yet highly erotric in ints mysterious content. Imgery exciting
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Thank you for an inspiring comment , I'm glad you enjoyed it
Cindy
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you are impressive especially in the description which you did with a fascinated penning here..The erotica and its pace is very catchy here..I love this piece .....well done...
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Thank you very much
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it left me dazed, wo wonderful are you in singing the poem, you take the reader through the jorney,makes him excited as well as wet. what a talent.My sweetest kisses to you
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Thank you my friend. I enjoyed this challenge
Cindy
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