how did you become mine
through all that distance
all those chances
mistakes
lies and retelling
I loved you
alone and lost
afraid
and beaten down
You wrote your way into my soul
searching for the light you hoped I had
my dying flickering little light
we made words together
forging new paths
out of broken endings
You helped me turn a mistake
into a miracle
and you found light
in my darkest place.
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Beautiful.
I love the hope that pervails in this poem. It made me feel all warm and gooey inside!
I am going to add you to my favorites list, hope you don't mind (who would mind? LOL).
I hope to read more poetry from you soon!
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this is a lovely dedication to a very close and important spirit, a person who has given and breathed into a life something vital, vital as light, air and truth ... there is love here .... it is beautiful to read something this sincere and simple yet elegant and heartfelt ... Moqui
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what the?this is nice no its beyond nice............its so full of feelings that make me wnat to cry for all you'v gone thro'.its a beautiful work of art if i may call it that............
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beautiful write, I hope to see many more from you
Your friend always,
--gim--
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so true my friend revealing the secret strength of the love which can change the life and can bring the beauty in our life..you touched the essence of this love as whole here..I love this piece..somehow it is a prayer of love..for love..
and to love..a great write I love this piece..well done...
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