Deep in a heartache of regrets.
Scarce moments of joy,
Plentiful memories of pain -
Shatter into the pile of honesty…
And truth.
Destroy my sanity with a vengeance.
Seek another soul,
When my time is soon
Forgotten.
Be in sorrow - be in decadence.
Gouge my eyes with a dagger -
And leave me blinded,
From all
Reality.
No longer to have this suffering.
Author notes
..::I know its not the best - but I tried::..
(( TITLES : Number Eight ))
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Good word "gouge."
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oooooOOOOOOoooo.... NO I LOVE IT!!!!
its really good... I promise... great form too... I rarely see that kind... VERY good... you should have more confidence in yourself...
I'd like give you applause.... but I don't have anymore (tear*) lol -
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aawwwww
thanks!!
glad to know you really liked it.
after reading it over-and-over...I think its becoming okay with me.
lol
((You are your own worst critic))
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