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*~ Your Map Revealed ~*

 

 

 

 

 

Trove in heart,  happiness healed
when contents called,  map revealed
within your walk,  stride set in stone;
unique in form,  feet tread,  fate sealed.

I wiped my windows,  looked real close
at actions done,  what risk they pose
and also asked if you're the one
to weave trap webs or lies in rows.

The Higher Powers handed sword,
tested trust on man's accord.
Watched if weight too much on back,
questioned what could you afford.

Your state of mind a magic pill
with Spirit standing high on hill.
Routine consistent,  caught their sight.
Behavior brave,  without overkill.

I'm honored,  blessed to take your hand
alongside you as Divinity planned
and proud of past accomplishments,
drive within steers spiritual demand.

Curiousity controlled,  mind kept at bay.
Patience a prelude not led astray.
You talk of near future,  focus on us;
deliver your Love with Light everyday.



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I am so Proud of my AP Husband
for penman brings Peace and Love
also has accomplished much
and Inspired me to walk the distance...

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  • NeonRose
    April 26, 2008
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    Beautifully penned! Congratulations on your Silver!


  • JinSays gold member
    April 26, 2008

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    I know penman, and you're right, he does bring a certain peace that's difficult to find anywhere, let alone online. I think this piece is artistically and spiritually, beautiful to behold.
    Thank you for your entry, and best wishes in this contest,
    Jin


  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    April 25, 2008
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    Awwwww Wonderful Poem For Uncle Penman hehe. Good luck with this it's a beautiful Dedication


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 11, 2007
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    I still feel as though this is a beautiful and wonderful write!
    A fine addition to this contest!
    Thank you so much for sharing!!!!


  • Tam
    December 6, 2007

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    AIN'T LOVE GRAND?

    Indeed it is...and what a lucky feller penman is to hold the heart of one so beautiful and gracious!!!
    God smiled at him the day he touched your soul...
    PENMAN...GET ON YOUR KNEES AND THANK GOD FOR THIS ENCHANTING LADY...YOU ARE THE LUCKIEST MAN ON EARTH...
    but somehow...I think he knows this...
    this poem truly expresses love...impossible to do unless truly felt...for how else could the words find the ink to fall upon hearts...
    beautifully written my dear...
    I feel blessed to read your words...as always!
    Blessings! Tammy

    desire and penman sittin' in a tree

    K I S S I N G

    first comes love....


    be glad we are in cyberspace...I can't even hum...


  • Swan song gold member
    December 5, 2007

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    This is really awesome and penmen is a lucky man!
    You are really awesome and I lost my breath on this one to and have now turned purple Help!
    You are too good!


  • Amera gold member
    December 4, 2007

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    I am such a sucker for love poems. This is absolutly beautiful and I can see that he loved it. I feel honored to read this as you allowed me to see your heart.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • penman gold member
    December 4, 2007
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    Beautiful

    Oh my love, you have blessed me so. Together we are one light that shines where it only burns bright in our oneness. I feel so alive with your love in my soul. Thank you darling, this touch me deeply and truly. Thank you for all you have done for me.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    December 4, 2007
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    Beautiful work here! It's a wonderful feeling
    to have someone in your life that makes you
    feel all of these things. A very beautiful
    dedication you have written here. Thanks a lot
    for sharing it and best of luck to you in my contest!





    Jeremy0826


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    December 3, 2007

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    Des,
    This is a wonderful dedication to a fine man and poet
    I'm certain you've made his heart smile with this one!
    I wish you so much love and joy that your heart just won't be able to contain it!
    Love ya, girlie!

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