My heart roars like a lion
As it pounds within me.
It pours shades of crimson liquid
Needed to portend my imminent storm.
Or is it merely a violet thunder?
Please tell me what you think
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Another strong and powerfu poem that was a pleasure to read.
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strong
wow
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precious heart
your words do supply such a vital essence, this was so very short in lines and words but powerfully large in style and flow and imagery of your mind and soul,,,blessings of life,love,laughter and light...FireStorm
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Hmmm, I like this a lot. If I were my old high school teacher I would comment that that length of the poem adds to it, because something that it vital doesn't necessarily have to be big. Sometimes, the most vital are the smallest. The words are powerful and you convey so much meaning in 5 lines. Kudos.
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I love the
opening line and then the even better the closing line
So much with a small amount of words, well done
Cin
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"Needed to portend my imminent storm.
Or is it merely a violet thunder?"
This last line is my favourite part of the piece because it is just profound and has numerous deeper meanings on so many levels! Keep on writing and thanks for entering my contest!
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