High Upon The Shelf,
Her Face Cracked And Flawed...
Once So Beautiful
Dust Covered, Strings All Broken...
Glassy Eyes Full Of Dispair,
Her Sorrow Will Continue Long After Tomorrow.
Windows Busted, Counters Empty
She Lay There Alone...
Forgotten.
The Sun Does Not Reach Her,
And Hope Will Never Find Her
Atop Her Shelf, She'll Watch The World Play.
Life Passed Her By
While She Waited For Him...
Fragile And Broke,
But Too Strong To Cry.
What did you think
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x3 So everyone knows my second account for writing different styles of Poetry (also I had forgotten my password for this one) is Jrokku no hime
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Beautiful
I liked the whole poem. It was very strong and sad. I can't help but feel sorry for the doll. I just want to pick her up and not let her go. In a way, she reminds me of me. Vey well written. -
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Aerontol
Erich! D: I miss you! Omfg it's nice to see you online. DX You should give me a fexing hug not the doll!
Anyway, thank you so much for commenting!
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Great
Very strong. I like the last stanza.
Its something we all feel like sometimes
And its good to know we're not alone
Good write
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Good
Fragile And Broke,
But Too Strong To Cry.
those are really strong lines..I think those lines sell the poem.
I guess we wall feel like that time to time
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wiltedbliss
Thank you so much, I am very glad you enjoyed my poem.
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