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Lost

I’m so lost
Alone in a dark forest
Alone in the world
My lantern has been blown out
The coldest has blown out my friend
The only thing that kept me warm
There’s noting to light my way
I’m alone
In a world of laughing and smiling friends
I’m been separated
Alone with only my thoughts
That only make me sad
Making circles in my head
I’m so lost
I’ve hit a fork in the road
I don’t know which way to turn
I’m so lost
And can’t my find
My way back
My way back to myself
To who I really am
I’m so lost

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  • eternal-devotion
    December 1, 2007

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    Quite interesting.

    After reading your page I wonder if you are writing about yourself or just an idea you had. This is very discriptive of someone who is very sad and you didn't give me that impression about you. It is very good nonetheless. It makes me sad though because I know that a lot of people are that lost and alone. Most people feel that way sometimes, usually it doesn't last for they find something that interests them and they can relate to. You seem to have a good way with the written word keep on writing and enjoy what you are so good at.