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Heavy and Tired, Let Me Put it On You

                 Can I take a rest
                               In You?

 

 

 

 

 














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          This world...

  God, I can't even say it.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This world, how did You take it?

 

 

How many hours did You weep over Your work,

The shavings sticking to the wood?

 

 

 

This world, how did You live it?

 

My God,

How many hours did You laugh over Your work,

The redeeming plan You had!

 

This world, thanks for choosing to save it.

 

 

 

    This world,

                   why don't you choose Him?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • C.o.g.
    December 3, 2007

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    I like what you did but you could of put alot more into it and the presentation. I think I know what your trying to tell and show the reader that your really thankful for god and that your trying to guide the reader there to but you really could of done it better. Just try harder next chance or opertunity you get becuase your not only showing the readers but God as well.

    God Bless