When I laugh I want to cry
No ones what I’m feeling inside
My happiness is only manufactured
No one knows my pain
No one knows my sadness
My nerves are stretched to the breaking point
My anger boiling up to the top
I feel like I want to burst
No one knows how much I’m hurting
No one knows my pain
My happiness is only manufactured
The grief I’m feeling no one can ever under stand
No matter how much you say you understand
You can’t you don’t
My smile is plastered on my face
My eyes never sparkle
They are never full of life
Every day I go to school
And feel nothing but sadness
My tough exterior is finally gone
Everything that’s happened has broke
My hard protective shell
My happiness is only manufactured
Sometimes I feel like I’m not allowed
To be sad,
Some days I want to be nothing but an empty shell
I feel so empty inside
I hate everything that’s happened
I feel so broken
My smile is only plastered
Even though I’m surrounded by people
I still feel as though I’m a world apart
Time passes but I still feel so sad
My happiness is only manufactured
I'm a lonely little sail boat apoun the raging sea
No ones has come to rescue me
And no one ever will
My happiness is only manufactured
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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oh this is really sad....leigh u make me depressled! this was a really good poem because you expressed your feelings exactly.
Some things I may suggest are that in the line "No ones what I’m feeling inside" shouldn't it be "no one knows what..."? and when you used understand twice it was kind of repetitive. maybe you could say no one understands, even if they say they do.
Other than that good job! -
Ouch.....
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texting time?
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