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V for Vanity [[Why so vain?]]

Two, four, six, eight
Skipping ropes on broken streets
Mirroring your sad face in so many ways
Ridges in your once perfect face, shattered to nothing

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NOT DONE.
[[ANOTHER ONE]]

Well....suppose you can give me something to work with?

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    November 30, 2007

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    Nice job Jess, can't wait to see the finished product, let me know when its done??? anyway its a great start. Good luck with finishing it!





    -Steve-