You always said you didn't know what you'd do,
without your little girl beside you.
That you didn't know what you'd do,
without me.
Here I am,
six months after you left us.
I'm not sure what to do,
now that I am without my mommy beside me.
You always said I was your favorite little girl;
it was special even if I was your only girl.
That you'd never trade me,
for another one.
Here I am,
not feeling so special anymore.
Missing you more and more,
with every passing moment and every tear.
Although there are many many memories i cherish,
I still have almost as many regrets.
If I could go back and fix them,
I would.
If I could have,
10 more mintues with you,
I'd spend all 10 in your arms telling you,
how much I love you and how sorry I am.
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Well written, with a very sad undertone. We need to live each moment like it is our last. A great read.
Kelli
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Sadness reigns supreme through this piece.
Thank you for entering and all the best in the contest.
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This poem definately touches the emotional strings within every person. I'm thinking about divorce here, or maybe even worse, the death of your mother?
Very well expressed yourself with these lines!
Leander -
I thought this was very emotional and tender. I can tell that this came from your heart and so I did enjoy it very much. Well done.
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very sad and sweet. i think we all have someone that the last stanza applies to.
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