Poetry links with honest contests entice and encourage writers to do their best. It helps for them to discover new outlets.
It is a delightful place to come explore others ideas and to learn from comments. Writing allows one a delightful place of rest for a soul weary of life's battles.
The vastness of the needs and wants, the mobile architecture of the challenges, the changing subjective matter presenting an almost twinkling of words unused in daily speech.
One's eyes remain unweary looking forward to the next suprise. Comments on wonderful harmonious oscillations to allow the soul a taste for rhythm and beauty.
All creates for the reader a mysterious and aristocratic pleasure in contemplating, while reading each work, allowing oneselfs the desire to travel or to enrich themselves within the confines of the words expressed.
Author notes
So many thoughts expressed from a readers view. Sometimes almost poetic.
A contest entry
- The 2007 Raven Contest: Feedback by Raven Contest.
525 points, ended December 5, 2007, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Just when I thought I was done commenting on poetry for the year... lol.
I enjoyed how you have blending your feelings about the contest with a certain harmony that creates an enjoyable pace when reading and considering.
The only downside to this piece goes to its suitability for the contest in which it is entered. We asked for plain text prose specifically because we wanted straight-forward feedback from 2007 contest participants and observers. While this piece excels in showing us that you are a poet it falls short of the meaningful critique that is the purpose of this particular contest. -
This is a great piece, loved the metaphors, great emotions , great flow, great choice of words, which create a very strong image, you did an excellent job writing this all the luck in the contest.
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