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Stupid Laser Light

As the moon grows dark
I lean in for a kiss
Forever leaning forward
Till it seems I miss

I look at you
Annoyance on my face
But it doesn't matter
You are staring into space

Watching a little light
Floating on the ground
Watching the little light
Whooshing round and round

I poke you
Till your shoulders sore
You say "what?" then turn away
And I poke you some more

I rest my head against his neck
Put my hand in his
Lean a little closer
And give his cheek a kiss

But I could be invisbile
As the laser rushes past
Pay attention to me now
Or ill shove that light up your as.s!

Please dont use big words, i'm not as smart as i'd like to be.

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  • WithoutWings
    December 8, 2007

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    I don't know why but for some reason, I just really like this. I can't pinpoint any one reason. Good job.


  • musik-freek
    December 1, 2007
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    lol, i get it.


  • Dragen2201
    November 30, 2007

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    lol

    nice i love it and i love the comedy at the end but at the same time i know what your talking about i get it from my wife all the time.