Beautiful white flower thriving,
Unique mysterious to the world
Nasturtium flower Name for queen
Recognize as the capucine
She embraces the dream of the night
Beautiful white flower thriving
Soft yellow face, striking red hair
Green eyes shine the nighttime brighter
Soft gorgeous green dress harmonize
Her soft green eyes as the stars bright
Beautiful white flower thriving
Star of the night name capucine
Joyful flower of the nighttime
No soft flash as her eyes shy light
Sparkly her pale white skin as the
Beautiful white flower thriving
Author notes
Quatern:
A quatern is a sixteen lines french form poem, composed of four quatrains. It has a refrain that is in a different place in each quartrain. The count for the refrain, first line, line six, line eleven and line sixteen. A quatern also has eight syllables per line.
Capucine: English and French name derived from the french flower name meaning "Nasturtium" this name was borne by the french actress who played inspector Clouseau's wife in the Pink Panther.
A contest entry
- New AP. Name by WhisperingSpirit.
500 points, ended December 10, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this was very good
i realy liked this poem
your flow was perfect -
a very nice reat poem here i enjoyed this it was very smooth running like luke warm water
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hmm, feels like you're somewhere in the old castle, watching the night strangers passing through the secret doors in their world they're trying to hide behind the night
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As a gardener and lover of flowers, I absolutely loved this. You did a great job with the prompt. The flow was excellent. I loved it.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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the beauty capture in this write is awesome! what style you have for painting...pretty!!!!
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so sweet and lovely....
softly penned...i can feel the words on my tongue.
beautifully written my dear brother
Tasha
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Beautiful beautiful imagery! I don't know which picture flashed in my mind more often; a beautiful lady in the middle of a forest, or a beautiful flower with all it's glory... lol
And I like that! ^_^
You truly are an amazing poet, especially when it comes to your wording. You can design such beautiful stories that really take the attention of the reader and take them to this place you tell about. And that place is truly filled with beauty.
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As ususal bro...
you have penned this beautifully
amazing
Diva
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Wow...you captured my attention with this write...it filled me with a picture of a beautiful Lady..not to mention I have green eyes too
I love the way you explain your style of poetry, I am such a nurt when it comes to that
I think I will follow some classes at your place
See if I understand all...well...I just wonder
Beautiful write here
XXJeannette
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beautifully written! I love it!
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I thought this was really, really, good! Shows some really true talent. Love the imagery and the concept. Thanks for commenting on my poem!
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Wow you're an amazing poet! I love to read form poetry but I can't write it...but I always love it when people do it well! Great imagery in this piece! Write on!
Lauren
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reading this made me fall on my knees
do i need to stay away from such lovely
elusions it was to perfect
your sweet
rose
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wow! Two thumbs up. I like the poem very much. Keep writing!
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Lovely!!!!
Hello, This is one beautiful poem. The words you have chosen create imagery as lovely as the flower itself. What a wonderful write. best of luck in the contest. I love the flower and the name. You take care my friend , Sandy
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Well structured and written piece of flowing imagery and interest. Thanks for sharing.
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A guy who is a technician with poetry and a romantic at heart. What a sailable commodity you are sir. --- Thank you.
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very intreesting flower and the skills you have mastered in this piece are awesome. You gave us a excellent read & write....novy
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Love the name and the flower,
you have done very well with this piece,
I wish you tons of luck in the contest.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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I'm in love with a flower now! Wonderful imagery. Thank you for sharing!
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This is beautiful
Thank you for your enterey
I love the name -
Just beautiful poem like the flowers...I do agree that it is nature which can be one with us becoming a mate of the soul while revealing its
truth..I love this piece revealing the beauty of nature in few words..and you did an impressive
crafting here ..well done..
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I love this form...Have only attempted to succeed in writing one..but one day I might. You turned something so basic, as a flower, into a beautiful vision. Beautiful writing, I will look forward to reading more of your work.
Soulful Woman
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That was a really interesting form
of poetry. It didn't seem to interupt the flow either.
I enjoyed it, and the words chosen to write this poem!
good job dear poet and thanks for introducing us to a
unique form and structure.
ears2hearyou
Kathleen : ))
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This is lovely
bro, always good to see you writing in Beauty of your heard. Good luck in the contest.
D I V A
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this is beautifully written and well expressed holding alot of fine crafted and powerful words. well done and best of luck
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