Dancing, spinning, out of control,
I am but a puppet in your control
Finally I give in, surrendering to your strength;
letting the love and care you have for me
settle into place
and I'm struck by your beauty and I finally realize
you've been there all along waiting for me to find you!
A contest entry
- ~* Speak to Me Again *~ by Desire.
525 points, ended December 3, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank You!
Thank You for Your entry: Serenity
..Holy Moly...my first comment did not take...
hopefully this one works
Wonderful piece You have penned and
felt as if dancing, spinning...
but through Your words
The last line grabs the reader in...
Love the line:
and I'm struck by your beauty
and I finally realize
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Judging will be done shortly
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Thank You!
Thank You for Your entry: Serenity
Wonderful piece You have penned and
felt as if dancing, spinning...
but through Your words
The last line grabs the reader in...
Love the line:
and I'm struck by your beauty
and I finally realize
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Judging will be done shortly
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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This is a beautiful and deep take on the picture, you have done a great job. Best of luck in the contest.
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