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Beautiful Dream of Heaven

You walked into my life and saved me from a mistake
And Fell in love with you that I knew wasnt fake

I give my heart to you to see her smiling face
You gave your heart to me and we never left our place

You fixed my broken heart of sin and showed me love
When I first saw you, you were like an angel from above

I would walk a thousand miles to be with you just one day
I swear to make you happy and safe and that is what I say

You mean the world to me and more than my own life
And Im glad to say that I have found my wife

Let it all be known that no one will hurt you again
And my heart skips beats hearing your voice again

You are like a dream to me that I wish never to end
I promise you my love is not for pretend

And if there was something I could do
To spend my life with you
Then I forever will do as we say I do
To never stop loving you

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  • Frodofan silver member
    January 31, 2008

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    This is alright. A sweet poem, but I think this falls under the umbrella of "cliché." The rhymes are very common as are the phrases, "walk a thousand miles," "angel from above," etc..