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tea today at four

pour some words into my ear
make a nice stout aural darjeeling
no need to sweeten
i like mine hot and strong
in turn, i'll steep your cochlea
Senno Rikyu at your service
master of libidinous liquids
ceremonial titillated ears
then we'll make oolong to each other
i'll brew your longing leaves
ferment your black dragon lips
sip the liquor from your labia
write it up for the society page
tea today at four and Thea pours

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  • nitefire
    January 11, 2008

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    Wow, never had tea quite like this! Suddenly I feel I am missing out on something! I love this poem's word use. A truely unique piece!


  • micol
    December 26, 2007

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    It will now be impossible to think about tea in quite the same way. Should make a difference reading those books where everyone drops everything for a cup of tea. Now it makes sense. Fun and well done.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    December 3, 2007

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    Well this is certainly interesting. Love the reference to the different teas and how you've made them each erotic in their own way.
    Nicely done.
    Thank you for entering and good luck

    Storm