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Tanka #1



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subtle hints of spring
spew yellow on the green and
mingle with the clouds
blossoming plants waken to
stretch and wait for the new day


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first ever tanka. woo.

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  • Kelli Marie
    January 29, 2008

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    ooh, how I wait for that spew of yellow! Seems like winter is fickled this season, 60 degrees yesterday and we are to get four inches of snow Thursday into Friday. I..yie yie..
    Great write.
    Kelli