Cold windy nights dont put up a fight
Would you like a jacket, thats right
Don't worry about me I'll be fine
I'm used to the wind's iced whine.
I'll step up in front and open the door
Jack Frost will be able to hurt you no more
Before this moment I never knew you
I'd do it for every young woman too.
The worlds seem so cold
Chivalry's dead or so im told
The gentleman's creed says be so polite
To everyone i will say goodnight
These acts of kindness are naught just an act
Every woman deserves a warm heart in fact...
Before we dine I pull out your chair
Something seems different is it your hair?
I guess my mind is of different times
You will come first in life so says this rhyme
A contest entry
- Chivalry by Frodofan.
600 points, ended December 14, 2007, 12 entries
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Comments
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Interesting. Seems forced though, like you were really struggling to get those rhymes. Wish the "I" was captialized too.
But not bad. A more modern look at the contest.
Thanks for entering.
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