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Hip Bones [random-hasnothingtodowithit]

So cold
I have a jacket on
and a hoodie on
I'm freezing
I'm getting sleepy
My body hurts
I took some medicine
so maybe i'll feel a lil better
my head hurts
my bones ache
i feel kinda
Lifeless
I feel like
Drifting off to sea
gone forever
I feel like closing my eyes
and falling asleep
forever
but then wake up
years from now
with a new body
new name
knowing no one
no one knowing you
or
being invisible
that would be nice
at least somewhat nice
I don't know
but this feeling
is weird
I don't understand it
I'm sorry

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