You are my light on a dark, stormy night.
You are my warmth on a cold, winter day,
My rock, My fortress, My love, My strength,
MY EVERYTHING...
I don't know how else to put it,
I love you with every inch of my body, mind and soul,
Everyone told me that I could never truly love a girl,
But see, I know that they're wrong,
I've never been more in love ever,
I've never really felt love until now,
when worst comes to worst,
it's you that I want to come crying to,
it's you who i want to hold me,
You, not anyone else in the world,
when we fight, the only person that i want to talk to is you,
every time I say your name I smile...
though many people never see that smile..
you're the only one that i want to share it with,
I want to love you,
and I want to know that you are feeling the same,
I want US to be real,
I know we can,
I love you more than anything,
You are the only one that I am willing to give my life up for,
the only one....
because I am only 16, everyone tells me that I am naive,
that I dont really know what love is,
well I can tell you one thing, and if you never listen to anything I say again,
is that those people have never been more wrong,
I LOVE YOU, no matter what my age is, no matter how naive they say I am, if this isn't love then I don't how to explain what it is,
I've loved since the first time I heard your voice,
I know that this is love and I know that this is real,
no one else would ever get me to sit down and write this,
no one besides you,
no one else has ever meant this much to me,
no one ever deserved to,
I dont know how many times I can say I love you,
but it will never be too many,
if I had to die today,
there is only one thing that I would want you to know,
and hopefully by now you know what that one thing is,
I LOVE YOU...
the only three words that mean anything to me anymore..
although I say them a lot, doesn't mean that they are any less significant,
they will never stop pouring out of my lips,
my heart is not a toy and I know how it works,
and I know what I feel,
the first thing that I have felt in a long time,
I know that it sounds cliche but it truly is,
it is also the best thing that I have ever felt,
I dont know what words are right to explain it, the only three that I know,
the only three that are worth saying, the words that can make or break you, the most powerful words in the world....
I dont know how else to say it,
I LOVE YOU!!
Love you always,
(and i do mean always)
Kaytie
Author notes
'Doctor doctor I'm suffering from the illness of Luv'
A contest entry
- ♥♥♥♥Lovesick or Sick of Love?♥♥♥♥ by Sorath.
600 points, ended April 21, 2008, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Show me some love! by Pleasantly Insane.
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Comments
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Long, but very good. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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This was so cute. Please check your grammar and spelling because that was the only thing that let you down here, but I could tell this came from the heart so you're awesome for that! Thanks for the entry!
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wow, this was a beautiful poem. I loved it & i booked marked it as one of my favorites

Great Job!
xo
Kandy



