I awake at the sound of your gentle voice
So softly calling my name
Brilliant moonlight floods across my room
While my heart becomes all aflame
I slip down the stairs and open the door
But where are you? I can’t see
But I know you’re there, not far way
I can hear you calling to me
The grass is damp beneath my bare feet
The trees whisper as I go by
I have to reach you my dearest love
As you call my name like a sigh
I reach the clearing, I see you there
You hold out your arms to me
I run to you and your warm embrace
Beneath that huge oak tree
There in the hollow of that massive trunk
As our lips and tongues entwine
I give myself to you just like before
On our bodies, we each did dine
Tasting your skin, drinking your love
Hearing you moan with pleasure
Trembling with joy, hardly able to breathe
As your lips find my hidden treasure
I straddle your body and we become one
With movements so sensual and slow
You fondle my breasts and I nibble your lips
You whisper words of love so I know
You stroke my hair, I kiss your neck
Each breathing in the scent of the other
I cradle you face between my hands
And swear my love is forever
Our heat is building beyond the point
Where we can’t hold back any longer
Then waves of explosions make us cry out
As the pulses become even stronger
In the after glow of loves sweet power
We lay quietly caressing and kissing
Until it was time for me to leave
To my real life where I would be missing
I couldn’t say goodbye, must not say his name
But since I was a girl I have loved him
Now he is a fantasy inside of my head
And my sweet dream is now growing dim
Time to awake, back in my own bed
If only my Darling could be true
But what are all these oak leaves here?
...................Could I have really been with you?
A contest entry
- Erotica (Picture Prompt) by Beating.
450 points, ended December 1, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - TEN THOUSAND POINTS OF RHYME (Now 20,000+) Part 6 Sensual by cricketjeff.
1250 points, ended January 8, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thank you for your entry in our 'Sensual' contest. No. 6 in our Rhyming Extravaganza.
We're very sorry that you were not among the prize winners this time, but yours was, nevertheless, an excellent entry which we both enjoyed reading.
Please join us in future rounds...
Sue and Jeff
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I have to say that you certainly have captured the essence of sensuality.One went on a beautiful ride into places only lovers should go not readers Excellent May i wish you the very best in the contest
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I have only had a couple of goes at this sort of thing but not sure how many times you can repeat it all without causing offence to someone. Thank you for your kind words.
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Offence now who could take that with poetry Keep it going
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Aww... this is superb. You've captured the sensual ploy of romance, the hidden pleasures of two bodies together and more, plus very good rhyming as asked for in the contest. And you've done it all without it seeming forced. Bravo!!
The imagery is clear yet subtle, leaving just the right ammout to the imagination.
I so enjoyed the essence of this very nice poem and I wish you best of luck in the contest
Dee
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Thank you so much for the comments. With all the poems on this site I am always so pleased that any one would stop to read mine and take the time to say anything
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enjoyed your whole story thought you did awesome
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"The grass is damp beneath my bare feet
The trees whisper as I go by
I have to reach you my dearest love
As you call my name like a sigh"
What a lovely diction and flow this has; breathtaking!
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Wow! I really like this piece, even though I'm usually not a fan of long pieces. But you made this one really unique. Good imagery and very sensual. Good job!
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SWQ Thank you for your very kind comments, my first try at writing this sort of thing.
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It's awesome.
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A beautifully sensual passionate write full of wonderful... quite stunning imagery
A pure pleasure to read such romance and sensual erotica
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Thank you so much for your comments. This is my first attempt at this type of thing and I wanted to portray a strong and powerful love and not sex. I hope this is what I have done.
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