It flutters-
Swooping,
Up!
Swooping,
Down...
It's glittering wings
Sparkling in the crystalline
Sunshine.
Pink and magenta
Reflect off the
Lush, joyous
Roses.
The light bounces off
The wings of
The delicate creature,
Feminine hues
Blending with
The yellow and black-
What am I?
Author notes
Another attempt at imagery- Nice, isn't it?
Also, the answer is a butterfly, kind of obvious, though.
A contest entry
- Ages 13 and Under - Mind Maze by Amunet Wolfbane.
300 points, ended December 14, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything goes. by still.she.waits.
600 points, ended April 1, 2008, 113 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please critique- I can take truthful comments...
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That was as good as Enigma! You have me beat! -
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Thank you
Vivien
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