Each smile she gives,
hides a thousand tears,
if you paid more attention,
you'd see she's hurting,
and see the scars that run deep inside her body,
she has nobody,
she has nothing,
nothing more than her bloody razor,
nobody loves her,
nobody cares,
her blood drips to the floor,
while she pops a few more pills,
she wonders if it will ever get better,
she cries herself to sleep,
just waiting for her father to stop screaming,
don't her parents even wonder,
how it makes her feel,
to be a broken soul in a broken home.
Author notes
kinda rusty. first thing ive written in a while.
(for contest: suicide)
A contest entry
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Comments
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This is good. I love the emotions you give. I can relate to the first two lines. Great job and good luck in the contest.
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:(( me too.
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really sad write ! i know how it feels , when you know theres no one in this world to care for you !
but anyways , thank you so much for entering and best of luck in the contest ,
"Each smile she gives,
hides a thousand tears," awesome lines
your friend and host ,
alex hex
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