Advert from me
Oh brilliant rays
of hopless daylight!
Those scornfull judgemental
eyes that look upon me
in such disdain
Skulk away to where you came
thrust out the darkness that i claim
Let be the crowlike shadows, sombre and whole
as mirrored shades of my sinister soul
abandon, trash me, Leave me be in peace
Just as your doubtful brilliant bars of light
Sink in the western nocturnes of begotten bliss
Let thy senere self be swallowed by the night
and bring forth slithering the shades i miss
quince of fortune.let me know what you think
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thanking you immensly
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well written
you said its different from your usual style, well its a great peice so its a good thing you tried something new
take care
HB
xoxoxox
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i like this. it has great imagiry. mwa. i love you
Brittany
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I love the imagery i can see in my mind with this. I love the first stanza. it flows very nicely together. well done you 2.
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thank you very much
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