You've never been there
You've always looked away
You've seen my good points
And you've seen my faults
And what did you have to say?
You said that you'de never
Believed in me-
Well now you've got you're way
I'm proud of myself
And I' living my dream
You've never been proud of me
All you've ever seen in me is failure
Even when I was at the top
Even when I conquered all-
It never ment anything to you-
Just like me
Listen to me now like you never did
'Cause this is all I'll ever say
Your dead to me you s.o.b.
I hope you'll always stay that way
So in the end-
Who was more dissapointed?
Who lost more?
You-
or me?
A contest entry
- Give me your best prewrites- ROUNDS!!! by seasonsoflove.
525 points, ended December 18, 2007, 44 entries
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Comments
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wow... great job on this... you forgot to put your name in the comments... but i know who you are... o well good luck.
rocklover91
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