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cough or just climb

a flower cone
a bud depending
on spiral staircase
motivation address
the door of retreat or fresh

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good luck isn't my comfort zone

the applause and emoticons aren't for my smiles

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  • just mercedes gold member
    December 6, 2007

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    thank you for your entry. I like your door idea, windows are doors too. With retreat or refresh you picked up on the repeated image, once static, once alive. You also saw the organic life forms, very perceptive.


    • also called
      December 6, 2007
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      my audition's been answered...

      deedeewp birthing an image

      you were more than sweet with the decentness to have me feel a resilience for writing from your looks at this. especially conceptual with "once static, once alive" you gave the piece value whether I lost or not in such a course of concours testifying to your judgement.

      I had an author note however that I'm not into emoticons nor the applause use. lowercaps might've been slipped by.

      liked your input,
      also called