Oh God
a detrimentally mutilated
man-at-arms is there
almost wrapped up
yet encountering with
a bow and arrow
retrieving the global
effervescence in his eyes
prompting him for
a mission to disinter you
Oh God...
A contest entry
- Invite Only 6 by Laura Lamarca.
700 points, ended December 14, 2007, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I live with one beloved
Comments
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Excellent!
The power of the mind conquers all! And you have that in abundance. It gets reflected in your verse, and inspires us...congrats!
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The mission is simple and plain to reality...A powerful warrior standing alert ready to battle in the war of souls for the Father...A truth that stands out in the forefront of this life...
Great Penning sweetie
Blessings
~Cheryl~ -
wonderful job here.
I loved this of course im a fan of your work. Great job and best wishes to you
Tory
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This is you...warrior for Him, battle worn but eyes alight with the Fire of Faith...this is an awesome write, my friend...just awesome. Succinct, powerful, I have few words, but much emotion from reading this...so well done!...Best of luck in the contest. Peace always, Rhonda
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