tears give again taste to regrets...
time reminds all my past,
life marches, don't know the end even,
some seconds, minutes, the hours?
don't decide on everything,
heart free to survive,
life cuts with dirk,
in blows of fright, cry, hate,
love without return,
fright of tomorrow now...
days are in order, alike,
tears which rage,
memories back again..
ideas re-emerge,
leave you,
you, my love...
leave you...
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Prompt: cold regret
A contest entry
- Cold Regret by DesolatELifE.
689 points, ended December 15, 2007, 29 entries
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I don't think I'd usually like this kind of poem, but I do like it. The constant commas and seemingly unfinished sentences make me picture the stuggle to cope with the problem.. I like that. Thanks for entering
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