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I Wouldn't Either

You think you know me
Just by what you see on the outside
The smile that slides on my face
You think I'm a nice girl
Who doesn't do anything wrong
Would it surprise you if
You found out I've done drugs
That I slice my own skin
To get at the pain that lies within
Would you cringe if you found out
I burned my own flesh
That I would do anything
To get rid of all that I feel
To be free of emotion
Would you like to know the real me then
With all that I come with
Or will you go running
Like all your little friends
Run away from someone different
Someone who's pain is debilitating
If I were you I wouldn't
I wouldn't want to get to know me either.

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  • Hey Nicole, nice piece...alot of emotion in this...I do relate to it on many levels...I hope everything is going good for you


  • islekine gold member
    December 15, 2007

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    This is a great poem,

    I am so not fond of dark, though, it's hard for me to appreciate this stuff. Take care.
    Write on!
    *PEACE*


    • PortkeyToNowhere
      December 15, 2007
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      Thank you. I go through periods of darkness and periods of not so darkness lol.

      Hugs Nicole xoxoxoxo