The sins of you and I
I.
Master
Push me against the wall
Rip the clothes from my skin and
Reveal my readiness for you.
Turn me round
Pull at my hair and leave
Your handprint on my arse
As you, spank away the sins
I have done against you.
I try to speak of the naughtiness
But a hand covers my mouth,
“I don’t want to hear it slave, your punishment has arrived”
He says to me in harsh tones
As a handprint is left to match the sting of the first.
II.
“Ooh Ooh Master” I moan as my cheeks, you spread apart.
I beg for more when you gently start to fuck my arse
And push me roughly against the wall.
Our bodies pressed together I let you have me.
Your pace is faster.
I want to touch myself so bad,
but I know you would never allow it.
A slap my master would give, knowing of my fantasies.
Another girl wearing a ten inch black strap-on or
A guy and anal beads, shared fucking and sucking.
I could never tell my master, he would disown me
scream names at me like “dirty whore” and “selfish slut”
as he pushes me out the door.
Looking down and muttering, “How could you defy me”?
Silence is my best friend.
I love my master and I take what I am given.
Sliding higher, hands grab legs
positioned and ready for the real ride.
We’re both out of breath but I still scream out in pleasure,
“you fuck me so hard, I love you master”.
I cum against your hardness
With my last spasm, you’re pulling out and turn me back towards you.
Your sweet juices flow free over my breasts.
A drop hits my lips; I tease with my tongue and lick it all up
With such satisfaction in your eyes,
you push me aside and say “eat it all up my girl”
while lighting a cigarette....
Author notes
I have finally gotten off my lazy butt and pushed these to parts together, so thank you to everyone who commented on the second part and im sorry your comment has gone now lol
I entered this into the contest becuase its sin related lol and is the sins I picture commiting with my man heheheheh
In a list
A contest entry
- Feeling Naughty? by sekmhet eye of ra.
600 points, ended February 24, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - JUST TWO DAYS TO REACH 1000 ENTRIES !!!! ( BE A PART OF THIS RECORD BREAKING CONTEST ) by Alex Hex.
300 points, ended May 1, 2008, 526 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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OMG, my eyes have just been abused, like seriously I must go poke them out because of this poem! Geez sis, you really penned the mess out of this one, now I need a cold shower 'n some ICE COLD water!!!!! This is a heck of a sin to commit with your man, GEEZ!!!!!
This one has thrown me off seriously, oh wow! I never expected this from you, what happened to the innocent girl I knew?!?! Woooow!!!!
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hehehe
hmm well you havent gone digging into my older works then lol...cause this is toned down compared to a few I have written lol
Hehehe I am inncocent I just have a very creative imagination
lol
Hope the cold shower worked
Muhahahahahahaha
Lov ya SiS
Cin
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An enjoyable piece of poetry, it certainly warmed the toes where other poems failed to reach on this sunny but chilly morning. A good poem.
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Well im glad mine didn't fail, thats for sure
Thank you
Cindy
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this is most definitely sinful, and sexy too!!! juicy dialouge, tremendous rhythm, and hot dialouge. this was a pleasureful read.
"I love my master and I take what I am given."
loved this line, it hit an all-time in sinful.
thanks for the entry, and keep on writing!!! -
Wahoo!!!! Sounds like a good time to me! A bit of arse slapping is never a bad thing in my books! hahahaha
Good stuff sweetie!
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nor in mine
Thanks Aunty Jack, glad you liked this one
Cin
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You're so sweet and so naughty at the same time sweetheart. I hope your cute little arse doesn't bruise too badly. Whatever block you were feeling while you were away has well and truly been knocked down and you're firing on all cylinders again. Very well done Baby Girl.
Love you
Mum 
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Aw thanx Mum , my arse ins't hurting/stingin too bad
I reckon the writers block wall has indeed been smashed down hehehe and it feels damn good
Lov U too Mum
Cin
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I'm just peaking into the Erotic section to get some ideas. This piece is well written. A dominating poem - but not disgusting. Nice job!!!!!!
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Thanks Samantha68, I do the disgusting full on erotic from time to time but I do prefer the gentle expressive side of things
thanks for a lovely comment
Cindy
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I don't know about the fist thing,lol
but this is quite intense and erotic, your wanting to be punished is teasing to the senses... your desire to be dominated, exciting!
A good piece! Can't wait for the next instalment
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Ah well each to their own I say LOL
The next installment is going to be a very hot experience for the readers
Domination is totally hot to write about
Look forward to you enjoying the next part
Thanks again
Cindy
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