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Once...Forever

What is this love I hear about?
A midnight tryst, a skeptic's doubt?
A look that burns with sweet desire
Mid summer fades to flames of fire
One moment that doth stole away
I know not nought another day
That was as sweet as was back then
I've found not one in the world of man

I've seen the stars all burning bright
In a day that was a cloudy night
I've seen men fly to clouds above
To bathe within their heavenly love
I've held a beast within my hand
Then set it free upon the land
I've seen this world from every view
Though never have I seen another you

And now I've felt this love I've heard
To break a heart, a mockingbird
And I have felt this pain it's true
I did love once, then I lost you
I felt your hand upon my cheek
I took yours from the land of weak
And though for years I did deny
We love but once, and then we die.

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  • Shadow Darkstar
    November 30, 2007
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    o.o?

    One moment that doth stole away
    I know not nought another day

    Okay. Go ahead. Call me retarded. But wtf does "nought" mean? It sounds like it doesn't fit here, or maybe I'm just lost cause I have shit for vocab! (which, you already knew).

    Nice blunt ending too. You almost sound like me there. That's a scary thought.