Rare to have Birth as Human,
where you have Mirth if,Woman!
When you are a Flower,
She will be a Shower-
Shower of Love!
When you are a Blower,
She too has the Power-
Power to blow!
If you are in merry,
She will be a Fairy-
Fairy of Beauty!
If you are in a confusion,
She gives the solution-
Solution by Intelligence!
Though she has tears,
She has no Fear-
No fear for Truth!
Though she has desires,
She feels sufficient-
Sufficient by Sacrifice!
Gives her Peace-
Peace of Mind!
Woman-
The Gentle Creation of God!
Won't you like your next Birth
to be Woman?
A contest entry
- The X Chromosome (700 POINTS) by Shahrazad.
700 points, ended December 6, 2007, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Hope this is the Nature of Women. What do you think?
Comments
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What a nice surprise! This poem is a final conclusion what woman is. And yes, whet that could be possible, I would like to be born again like a woman.
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This sounded like this poem should be a speech shouted on a stage in a fiery frenzy of words. I liked the fairy reference. Some of the ryhme felt a little forced and it weakened a very powerful poem. All in all Good job. I like wher eyou went with this poem. Thanks for entering the contest!
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Wow! This is an awesome poem. You did a really excellent job in putting this together. God bless you for putting this on AP here and may He also bless you in all that you do and write. You have an astonishing talent as show up above. Best wishes to you and this beautiful poem in the contest.
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