Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

Going Home

Havent been home in a week now,
  And I cant say that ive missed it
Havent seen you in a couple days
  I Cant say im sure i care

Anymore...

Cause anymore I hate to talk to you
  And I dont care who's to blame
Cause I already know to much
  You cant that much from me

Anymore...

Cause anymore i hate to think of love
  and I dont think that it exsists
Cause i have never seen it last
  Dont ask me to hate someone

Anymore...

Cause anymore I dont want to see
  What I used to call my home
Cause theres nothing there the way it was
  Dont ask me to pretend

Anymore...

Be kind.. its personal

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • DaScAd
    November 30, 2007

    Edit | Reply
    see, you cant say your stuff sucks. This one is really really good. Horridly sad, but really really good.


  • PureRomance
    November 30, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    I can truly relate to this poem. This was amazingly put together. Keep up the excellent work. This is such a sad poem, but I can relate to it so much it's almost scary. I'm sorry that you feel like this. Again, I must say this was truly amazing. Keep up penning and I'll continue reading.


  • Tarja
    November 30, 2007
    Edit | Reply
    Wow... you spoke the words of my heart recently. I was at my grandparents house in America and the state is tearing it up horribly. It breaks my heart to see this horrendous change to make a god damn freeway. This was very emotional and personal for me. Nice job.