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Following My Bliss

While following my bliss, I found you
The secret of my heart's desire
Such yearning took from a dark, reluctant past
Your dazzling eyes became my guiding fire

Illuminating paths that lead to glory
I followed close beside you in a dance
So grateful now my mind reveals the story
With each new opportunity and chance

So all I visioned came my way
The sweetest raptures in blessed praise I see
Since then I always thank the day you took me
From where I was, to where I want to be

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  • Shadow Darkstar
    November 30, 2007
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    Yay! Mal ish here! Now I can really get critiques. My friends are lame! Nice write, not bad for your first one here. I sense someone will get a shit-load of reads on his poetry.

    Oh.
    Btw:
    You're still getting that dedication in my book.
    so deal.