I still wonder if she's there?
and if she cares, I can't despair
Cause if I dare, my feelings bared
So unaware of what we shared
It's not my time to feel this way
But, all my skies have turned to gray
I can't replay that single day
I must move on, I must be brave
I feel my life slip through my hands
I need to understand it's not the plan
I got my band and all those fans
That's all I need, all that withstands
The test of time, I drew that line
Too many times I payed this crime
Love is there to make you sigh
Then walks away and makes you cry
Nothing short of living a lie
It hurts you, but it's so divine
The pain
In a list
A contest entry
- Closing TODAY by Misery into Melody.
670 points, ended December 6, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - + I'll Never Stop Loving You + by ThatONEweirdChick.
900 points, ended December 31, 2007, 97 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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True enough- it is exquisite that pain.
Lovely write- and well said.
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Wonderful
Very well done. Congratulations on your bronze.
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This poem reminded me of How to Deal by Frankie J. The mention of a lost love and a band in the same poem I guess just made me think of it. Heard it before? Wonderful poem, great emotion and thanks for entering.
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i really enjoyed the rhyme, flow and over all content of this! great poem and i wish you good luck in my twin's contest. Merry Christmas!
~Dommi
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I really loved this, nice work. Good luck in the contest.
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I love this. It rhymes, which is pretty frickin' awsome, it has great detail, and it is short, but full of emotion. I believe this is a great piece.
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My Handsome Brother ~
To picture your face....and then to read these words, makes my heart break ~
This is such a mirror of that Big Heart of yours......don't ever let it get broken,
Bear luvs ya Bro ~
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