Oh what raging sorrow fills this soul
to see how unrespected passion has become.
Sexual desire and untame lust
takes what once was beautiful now beauty undone.
Wild pleasure is what's known to be love
heated nights 'neath the stars controls the lover's mind.
The moans and gasps which have burnt my ears
also cause my heart to break. Leaves no hope to find.
My heart floods with water but dry eyes
are met with yours as I gaze into deprived stares.
I can see in you something missing
a dream you desire to have instead of nightmares.
Yet there's nothing I can do for you
To have a bond that's real you need to look above.
See the wonder that we can not grasp
and know that no one could ever explain true love.
Please tell me what you think
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Sentiments well expressed in these lines; liked the flow and the message you share in the poem. Quite a sad write, true of today's young - dates are all about sex and not getting to know one another. Too easy to get hurt in many ways trying out so many lovers.
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I LOVE YOU! =D
i know i've been gone and all but i really like this poem
i just wrote a new one if you want to check it out... its about me and my "friend" i told you about her at dinner the other night, the "friend" you would have punched lol but im trying to work things out kinda like... let her know what i think and all... i'll let you know how things work out kk then love ya babe
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A nice piece. But you just depressed me...
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I'm sorry?
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OH MY GAWD! I love this poem. It's beautiful & breath-taking. You did an amazing job with putting this one together. God bless you for sharing this and coming up with such a beautiful poem. Keep up the excellent work.
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Thank you for your kind words. I wasn't sure how this would turn out.
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