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erythron, evanish

  you're the curse under my skin,
and everything that represents
      my filthy sins;
  you are my one week downfall.

temptations went unnoticed . . .
  but I'm too blinded by battle scars
to deal with frivolous things;
like hope and proximity.

  I live in distance,
and breathe in the resonance.
  I sleep in sin,
and dilute my passions dim.

Despite the clarity,
  there has to be a bridge to cross
before I discern it.


yet your presence sucks
  the cold air out of my lungs.


you are my anthrax,
 
    my heroin,

and my guilt incarnate.




I fell a few feet farther than expected;
  suspended in concrete,
a basket of broken dreams
      scattered at my feet.

But I won't burn out.

  My trail will mark the sky
whether or not you exist.

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"Fuck you and the future we don't have."

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  • TheClosestThing
    December 4, 2007

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    This is really good, particularly the last few lines.

    "My trail will mark the sky
    whether or not you exist." <-perfect conclusion

  • ZachofDoom
    December 4, 2007

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    I live in distance,
    and breathe in the resonance.
    I sleep in sin,
    and dilute my passions dim.

    My favorite stanza, love.

    your poems are shorter now...still amazing. wish i could write like you


    • Fireworks
      December 28, 2007
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      Maybe if you'd take the time to actually WRITE once in awhile... :/

      Or; you know, get online?

  • B sus
    November 30, 2007
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    <3