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I had just found

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When I looked in his eyes?

I saw emerald green sparks,

singing out to me as if I had just found my ..... 

That night when he tenderly reached for my hand?

I too felt the shiver as our faces surprised us both...with a  blush.

I femininely squeezed his hand, smiling.

I could feel, sense him relax, enjoy his stride and self confidence. 

I tell you true, I couldn't wait to press my lips against his. 

Breathe in deep.... his scent, fulfill his every desire and need. 

All my pleasure centers were aroused and in wait. 

Laughter and conversation just pulled us in closer,

as if we had always been.... the most intimate of lovers.

His body language was easy to read, his gestures rhythmetic, gentle.

So I asked tongue in cheek, "perhaps we have been lovers in some past life?" 

Powerfully I flow in unison with you.

A little startled he smiled,

"dear god woman....you have me weak in the knees."

As we walked home I couldn't resist.......

"would you like me to call you in the morning,

whisper in your ear,

confess my sweet intoxicating dreams of us?" 

A woman of passion, never denies her feelings, for us it is a test. 

In the morning when I awoke, pink roses were left at my door,

with a short simple note;

"Where have you been?  For centuries I have been searching...

I am the love of your life."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

My parting gift to you in your contest is to remember
LOVE...precious and beautiful it is....come back soon,
we will be here awaiting you.

my husband and I were easily connected..we flowed together on some energy level, we spoke about it our
first date, as if "we thought in unison together."
It is fascinating too because we have many things that do make us different! Which only makes him even more interesting to me!

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  • CharlotteRose
    February 13, 2008

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    Wow, how romantic! Like a storybook romance, to be sure, yetit's not--a powerful testament to keeping the hope of finding true love alive. Beautifully done, thx for entering.


  • MartaJay
    December 11, 2007

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    i loved it and thanks 4 commenting my poems. thank you for ur help. please continue giving me tips. i want to be a good poet like you someday


  • Beating gold member
    December 6, 2007

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    wow! this is just really beautiful! I guess you just described a love and a meeting that most of us can only dream about. You're lucky to have found it!


  • The Madman silver member
    December 3, 2007

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    Simply beautiful write here, so sweet, lovely, innocence too> Amaxing how things can "click" in us when we meet the right person and how they make us fel. Truly a wonderful work jere and an thank you tossed in here for sharing this with us,

    Evan


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    December 3, 2007

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    The fact that you related this to your real life and personal relationship makes this an outstanding read.
    Thank you for entering and good luck

    Storm


  • Poetry and I Inc
    December 2, 2007

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    Oh I just loved this. Beauty, love, intimacy, all at its best my dear! Wonderful and very well structured. These were my favorite lines: Laughter and conversation just pulled us in closer,

    as if we had always been.... the most intimate of lovers.

    Thanks for sharing and keep penning!

    ~Mstrss"


  • ennovy silver member
    December 1, 2007

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    Beautifully penned piece of poetry, and its full of love, passion and reality....Thanks for sharing this piece of poem.........novy


  • Great Cthulhu
    December 1, 2007

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    The last few lines gave me goosebumps! Incredibly powerful image! Reminds me of all the good things humans can do for each other. Thank you.


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    November 30, 2007

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    Awww this is just so sweet,
    I know what you mean, because I feel
    the same way about my special someone.
    I know I loved him before
    You told a very lovely story in your write.

    loveandblessings2u & YOURS ALWAYS
    JOYCE


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    November 30, 2007

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    This is so beautiful. The words were soft and gentle and touched this reader very deeply. I am happy to hear about your special relationship with your husband. Not too many can say that. Great job with this piece.
    Soulful Woman


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    November 30, 2007

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    Awwwwwwwwwwww. Sissy, that was absolutely beautiful. You did such an excellent job with this. I hope that it never ends for you two.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • moluv10
    November 30, 2007

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    Wonderfully done! Your husband will be proud of this one. I love the flow and imagery of this piece. Great job and best of luck in the contest.


  • Endeavor gold member
    November 30, 2007

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    Excellent


    In the morning when I awoke, pink roses were left at my door, with a short simple note;
    "Where have you been? For centuries I have been searching...

    I am the love of your life."

    Beautiful ending to this precious verse
    Great story

    Rick


  • onesugar gold member
    November 30, 2007

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    To find your soul mate is a wonderful feeling.
    when you first meet you just know. A beautiful write and a pleasure to read.
    ~sugar~


  • Ephiphany
    November 30, 2007

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    lovely write my dear sister...

    loved it and thanks for sharing with the group and good luck in the contest as well.

    ephiphany


  • motel silver member
    November 29, 2007

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    my cynical side laughs at -
    "perhaps we have been lovers in some past life?"
    when I read this my eyes roll BUT the idealist in me cannot but help fall for this poem. if what you say is true, then you are both very very fortunate. thank you for letting the idealist in me smile & tell the cynic to keep quiet.


  • Naridill gold member
    November 29, 2007

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    Very beautiful, you have crafted such love through the simplicity of words and it is so beautiful and inspiring.


  • Purpledragon
    November 29, 2007

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    wow that is so beautiful. i was almost in tears . you used all the right words and described the scene perfectly. i felt like i was there. thanks. it is truely wondeful.


  • jcat gold member
    November 29, 2007

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    AWWWWWWW...... I feel so lucky to have been given a sneak peek into your life!!! What wonderful love that is shared by you both...... Not many people can claim such deep love and devotion. Wonderful!!!


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    November 29, 2007
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    That is so beautiful. Love is the truest thing.
    Many blessing to you both.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    November 29, 2007

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    That is so awesome that you have found
    your soul mate! Relationships like yours
    are rare and few these days. We all think
    for a while that it is right and meant to be,
    then for one reason or another it all comes
    crashing down before is. It's a wonderful
    feeling to have someone in your life that
    you can relate to and who can relate to you.
    Wonderful write here and I wish you both
    many more happy years together! Thanks a lot
    for sharing your story here and good luck to
    you in the contest!




    Jeremy0826

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