I walk into the lounge, order a beer and sit back
In comes this gorgeous dame, in a dress I would attack
She glanced at me, stunning me with that perfect smile
So I walked up to her, watching that body I wanted to defile
Her mouth opened slighty, as she saw myself erect
Her eyes were burning with passion, it wasn't hard to detect
So I buy her a drink, and we have a quick dance
I slid my lips down her neck, and put her in a trance
I felt her nipples harden, as my hands ran down her chest
she grinds on me harder, her ass almost makes me mess
After the song I take her hand, and lead her to my room
I unlock the door, her pussy I would consume
she walks to the bed sitting on it awaiting
I lock the door, turn around and see her there sitting
I took off my shirt, undid my pants, she did not balk
I walked up to her, hard as ever, grabbing on my cock
she stands up, and down comes that dress
then sits back down and deepthroats me with finesse
Now all wet and wild, I flip her on her knees
I dip it slighty in her, she cries out to me "PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!"
(Alternate ending)
She turns her head and smiles at me, then she cuts the cheese
Oops!
BAM! LOL
A contest entry
- Naughty Guys ..... Adults only by Riftkin.
600 points, ended December 6, 2007, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Loved the humor with the extra ending
you sure had me going with the flow and rhyme
this is something that shows naughty in a great way
thank you so much for entering.
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wow thanks!
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you are welcome for that was a great poem
Riftkin
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wow...arent you a provocative and humored one...interesting alternate ending i must say. lol
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LOL
WICKED SENSE OF HUMOUR
THIS IS VERY PROVOCATIVE... DEEPLY PASSIONATE!
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haha deepy passiionate
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That's just not right.. LOL! But sure funny!
Thanks for the laughs.. All the best within the contest!
Peace, Timothy
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thanks, I made some edits/line checkups
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